tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5927870683677181756.post2991128324593671661..comments2023-10-15T04:48:05.528-04:00Comments on Free the Princess: Inspiration and DecisionsMatthew Delmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11452378192874048547noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5927870683677181756.post-68162087939474697622010-01-20T21:45:34.118-05:002010-01-20T21:45:34.118-05:00Well I've never liked baseball, but your final...Well I've never liked baseball, but your final sentiment is spot-on. I think of it this way: when Future Adam is published, is he going to look back at this time and think, "Geez, I wish I had sent it out a few months sooner and saved me some time"? I'm pretty sure he won't care.Adam Heinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02225813532455467868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5927870683677181756.post-18007616745813561382010-01-20T18:16:44.610-05:002010-01-20T18:16:44.610-05:00Touche. I think you expressed it perfectly. I did,...Touche. I think you expressed it perfectly. I did, of course, mean while I'm writing. Not revising.L. T. Hosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12448176940211118898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5927870683677181756.post-33797864314195262752010-01-20T13:50:59.785-05:002010-01-20T13:50:59.785-05:00Susan --
No, it doesn't count. But no worries...Susan --<br /><br />No, it doesn't count. But no worries, I won't hold that against you. :)<br /><br />L.T. --<br /><br />Thanks for the support! I tend to tune out the advice during the first-draft phase of the work, but really start paying attention during revisions. It's hard to get the framework down in the first place, but it's comparatively easy to revamp things to where you want them once the bare bones are ready.Matthew Delmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11452378192874048547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5927870683677181756.post-5493060181593147562010-01-20T13:47:09.164-05:002010-01-20T13:47:09.164-05:00At some point, I just glaze over and stop looking ...At some point, I just glaze over and stop looking at advice. That's usually the point where I just start doing things how I wanted to anyway. Not saying that works, but when it comes to being overloaded I generally just tune out and march ahead. <br /><br />Best wishes getting that backstory in there!L. T. Hosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12448176940211118898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5927870683677181756.post-48596260604005865322010-01-20T13:18:58.693-05:002010-01-20T13:18:58.693-05:00I have Maass' book on my shelf, uncracked. Doe...I have Maass' book on my shelf, uncracked. Does that count?<br /><br />Seriously, it was a huge adjustment for me to discover I couldn't just set a timeline for revisions and stick to it. That the story would <i>literally</i> take as long as it took to get it right. A side benefit of a lengthy revision process (especially if spiced with other WIP in the middle) is some distance to see the warts more clearly. At least that's how it works for me. You definitely have to go with your gut, even when it's saying "you really need to get rid of chapter 2, it's a dog!"Susan Kaye Quinnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07348197999397141067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5927870683677181756.post-15806205476592582492010-01-20T12:14:14.586-05:002010-01-20T12:14:14.586-05:00Your last paragraph is identical to my own feeling...Your last paragraph is identical to my own feelings, lately. I wanted to be done and querying by January. Then things got out of control and life got in the way of revisions, so I pushed it off to February... then I got some more beta feedback and some life got in the way again, and now I'm feeling like I might have to push back to MARCH, and it just kills me. <br /><br />On the other hand, you're absolutely right. Better to have it done to the best of your ability than to send something out when you know it could have been better!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5927870683677181756.post-78214768166311626352010-01-20T11:49:10.409-05:002010-01-20T11:49:10.409-05:00Shannon --
Solid vision? Umm ... yeah ... of cou...Shannon -- <br /><br />Solid vision? Umm ... yeah ... of course I do! *looks around, making sure no one notices*<br /><br />I think I have a solid vision, but whether or not the final product becomes what I think it's going to become is up for grabs.Matthew Delmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11452378192874048547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5927870683677181756.post-8094213152709281842010-01-20T11:33:33.611-05:002010-01-20T11:33:33.611-05:00Oh, you know how I love baseball!! I think I'...Oh, you know how I love baseball!! I think I'm going to have to break down and buy the Donald Maass book - everyone seems to love it. It sounds like you have a pretty solid vision for where you want to take Callarion - that's a big part of the battle right there.Shannon O'Donnellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17299313309059235876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5927870683677181756.post-34757680471248481262010-01-20T11:21:01.066-05:002010-01-20T11:21:01.066-05:00Bane --
My personal rule is to only use the advic...Bane --<br /><br />My personal rule is to only use the advice that makes sense to you. I give more weight to Mr. Maass's stuff than others because he's been representing speculative fiction for quite a few years. He's more of a genre fiction agent than a literary fiction agent, so I feel like he speaks my language better than other advice-givers might. <br /><br />That's not to say my fellow writers who compose literary fiction aren't brilliant. It's just a matter of knowing which advice makes the most sense for me to use in my own work.Matthew Delmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11452378192874048547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5927870683677181756.post-90969771216301907332010-01-20T11:15:03.506-05:002010-01-20T11:15:03.506-05:00Taking more time is highly frustrating, but what m...Taking more time is highly frustrating, but what most resonated w/ me was your point about Mr. Maass -- there's so much advice out there and frequently I find that it only adds to my confusion (and I'm asking myself: "What the hell do they want?").Joshua McCunehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17367262185912463258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5927870683677181756.post-21688911020235546092010-01-20T11:02:10.895-05:002010-01-20T11:02:10.895-05:00Megan --
Baseball analogies are the best. Most pe...Megan --<br /><br />Baseball analogies are the best. Most people get what you're trying to say and you can sound deep without going into esoteric philosophy. <br /><br />The more annoying part about plot inspirations is that they almost always happen when I'm doing something that means I can't write them down!<br /><br />Kelly --<br /><br />I might go buy that workbook now. Thanks for the recommendation. Oh, and welcome to the insanity!<br /><br />Stephanie --<br /><br />Since the first draft of CaN was written in eight months, I figure I can give myself at least that long to revise, revise, revise.<br /><br />Heck it took me ten years to get SON OF MAGIC into the state it's in now. What's sixteen months for this story?Matthew Delmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11452378192874048547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5927870683677181756.post-6713718005730239272010-01-20T10:45:51.257-05:002010-01-20T10:45:51.257-05:00The baseball analogy is spot-on. I gave myself th...The baseball analogy is spot-on. I gave myself three years to write HATSHEPSUT so I've still got a year to go, but I never really thought about the revisions process. That's taking a while, but I know it's worth it.Stephanie Thorntonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17437077559099315853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5927870683677181756.post-79064528177957980562010-01-20T10:11:17.440-05:002010-01-20T10:11:17.440-05:00I totally agree. I'm right there with you and ...I totally agree. I'm right there with you and am dealing with the same thing myself. I too have Writing the Breakout Novel and reference it all the time. I also have the workbook that goes with it and found it very helpful. In fact, quite a few of the exercises that I did in the workbook transferred into my WIP. If you don't have it, I would recommend buying it.Kelly Lymanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14773120663217816189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5927870683677181756.post-13217300370326470762010-01-20T09:46:14.034-05:002010-01-20T09:46:14.034-05:00Your last line is completely me! This whole proces...Your last line is completely me! This whole process is taking longer than I'd like but it's worth it in the end if you nail it with a homerun!<br /><br />And personally, I love those little moments of clarity and inspiration when the plot/characters come together with a new idea. Those are the reasons I write.MeganRebekahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285116194891827858noreply@blogger.com